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Help - Please correct my sentence
Hello, sorry for bad english. Please correct my sentence
This is me and my bestfriend. This picture was taken while a trip to Yogyakarta when we had study tour thee weeks ago. We were on the bus 3. In the bus 3, there are 3 classes that is X MIA 3, X MIA 4, and X MIA 5 with dominated by our class, X MIA 4.
We took this photo when there is awkward moment, Labib Ryandi Mangaweang at the top left-hand corner was sleeping beauty. Labib was sleep with his mouth open. In fact it is normal, but we think it’s funny. Beside Labib is Hanif Farhan Zulfikar that always makes us happy and laugh. I was in front of Hanif that handsomest guy in the classroom and I sat beside Gienzka Azzahra to take photo. We are friends who are always happy ever after.
Thank you
This is me and my bestfriend. This picture was taken while a trip to Yogyakarta when we had study tour thee weeks ago. We were on the bus 3. In the bus 3, there are 3 classes that is X MIA 3, X MIA 4, and X MIA 5 with dominated by our class, X MIA 4.
We took this photo when there is awkward moment, Labib Ryandi Mangaweang at the top left-hand corner was sleeping beauty. Labib was sleep with his mouth open. In fact it is normal, but we think it’s funny. Beside Labib is Hanif Farhan Zulfikar that always makes us happy and laugh. I was in front of Hanif that handsomest guy in the classroom and I sat beside Gienzka Azzahra to take photo. We are friends who are always happy ever after.
Thank you
Diubah oleh raihanmhndr 29-05-2014 13:29
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