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Despite the intensive and short period of the course, I was able to befriend with other students, especially those from Hong Kong. I am very fortunate to have taken Prof. Chois managerial accounting. What Ive experienced through this course is just inexplicable. BUT, I am confident that it was an overwhelmingly positive experience.
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So shall I go first?
Here's the text.
Despite the intensive and short period of the course, I was able to befriend with other students, especially those from Hong Kong. I am very fortunate to have taken Prof. Chois managerial accounting. What Ive experienced through this course is just inexplicable. BUT, I am confident that it was an overwhelmingly positive experience.
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Original Posted By usernamez►Permisi gan, mau Tanya, ane lg bkin undangan nikah pke bhasa inggris, kira2 udh bner blom ya? Soalnya kata tmen ane harusnya pakai "our" Bukan "their" tp ane liat undangan orang luar sbgian besar pakai "their", tolong dcek gan, thanks
Spoiler for :
lots of other people also use "our" and/or "us" particularly to refer to the happy couple together with their families
> if using "their" instead, it was usually written in the EO's/third party event host's perspective, not of the wedded couple's perspective (although, in a sense, the EO could also write "us" to refer themselves as a party given "authority" by the couple and families to invite the guests)
the sentence of prayer in arabic
"please join us to celebrate the nuptial bliss of
>Adam Stewart
>the second son of Timothy Stewart and Matilda Stewart
>>and
>>>Eve McGregory
>>> the sole daughter of (late) Samuel Jr. McGregory and Priscilla McGregory
Nuptial Ceremony: 32nd of May 2019, 10 am
Reception Party: 33rd of May 2019, 6.00 pm
Venue: Graha/Convention Centre/Ballroom/Garden Party/Hotel @ ...
(Dress Code, only if necessary)
Preferred Wedding Gift (if the couple only receive pecuniary gift or not)
Etc."
"please join us to celebrate the nuptial bliss of
>Adam Stewart
>the second son of Timothy Stewart and Matilda Stewart
>>and
>>>Eve McGregory
>>> the sole daughter of (late) Samuel Jr. McGregory and Priscilla McGregory
Nuptial Ceremony: 32nd of May 2019, 10 am
Reception Party: 33rd of May 2019, 6.00 pm
Venue: Graha/Convention Centre/Ballroom/Garden Party/Hotel @ ...
(Dress Code, only if necessary)
Preferred Wedding Gift (if the couple only receive pecuniary gift or not)
Etc."
the "us" written above refer to the happy couple, their families, and/or (if there's any) the third party host of event
while the "late" written before the name of someone, indicates that the person has already "departed" (deceased) before the event could be conducted (a.k.a. alm.)
hope it somewhat helps
Diubah oleh chris.p.duck 19-05-2019 03:54
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