ahh ada kategori artikel dimana kita bisa show off,share artwork ato nyumbangin artwork/fanart gitu ? yang pasti artwork buatan sendiri ?:matabelo:/ kalo ada saya mo nyumbangin beberapa artwork dan fanart.. :ngacir: that's a great idea \:matabelo:/
wogh ternyata serius mulai \:matabelo:/ ikutan dong :bingung: bisa bikin cover, layout ma translate :bingung: http://i597.photobucket.com/albums/tt54/AppuruPan/amhmagztrap.jpg http://i597.photobucket.com/albums/tt54/AppuruPan/amhmagz.jpg
OTOKO DA :genit: wooot wants to be a girl :genit: but wait :think: if she became a girl from birth without memories of her male self the psychological effect of crossdressing/genben would never take effect FFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU UCCCCCCKKKKKKK
>Genre sci-fi >explain this and that :think: Give your best speculah :cool:. I'll just waiting for the next ep. justru sci fi ama mystery itu dua genre yang seru dispekulasiin
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Kemungkinan sih iya coz kalau beneran itu Phone Microwave whatever bisa ngirim balik ke masa lalu, berarti saat pisangnya sudah melewati beberapa hari, mengalami pembusukan. But IRL saya juga lum pernah ngelihat pisang busuk jadi gelly-like ijo-ijo gitu. Paling sering ya coklat kehitaman. kan da...
general plotnya bagus tapi sampe akhir ga bikin menimbulkan ada rasa empati ato simpati ke chara manapun pas lord max mati juga rasanya biasa-biasa aja, ga ada impact dan ga terlalu peduli
Di gudang :think: Yang bisa di raih dengan cepat cuma buku filsafat doang :linux2: coba cari buku2 lama di google books
Disini (Fanstuff) ada ga yang bisa di jadiin contoh fokus penceritaan yang baik? :think: Atau tempat yang bisa baca online? :think: situ pasti punya novel kan :think: baca aja
good detail but nevertheless lack in errr... atmosfer. :think: Ada saran? :) gimana yah :think: detailnya terlalu fokus ke teknis daripada ke penceritaan :think:
honest~ atmosfernya kurang kerasa :linux2: apalagi pas battle scene battle scenenya detail, tapi ga kerasa kaya di medan perang :linux2: sisanya oke :o paling penceritaan chara kurang kerasa
just spit it out :linux2: Mana mungkin chapter 1 blom selesai langsung gw terbitin chapter 2. Setiap chapter memang punya loop ama chapter sebelumnya. honest or not honest?
ooh gini :hammer: i confused this style for another variation of 3rd person narrative berarti kamu harus buat pembaca merasa mereka adalah protagonisnya tanpa merasa 'didikte' oleh narator which is hard :linux2: exactly
there is no second person narrative there are only 1st and 3rd person narrative, guess you're referring to 3rd person narrative then Your scream echoes throughout the alleyway. The man behind you followed, as you ran outside trying to find help. Your foot were numb, after running around all...
Wogh memang menarik sekali sih kayaknya :matabelo: errrr.... jadi lu kesini cuma bilang judulnya sama blbablablabla, the other "Lord of the Flies" is very good. And that's it :linux2: lol mau komen tapi bingung :think: