Once upon a time, there live a little girl in town
She has such perfectness that people admired
Beautiful face, smart thinking and good personality
No one dare to see her low forever
It’s not only the girl that always being talked to
There’s live a little boy in town
His heart is white as snow
His clever as deer who taught how to fool crocodile
But no one ever wants to see him right
Some night, comes a big news
The girl was found dead
Her bloody hand is holding a letter
The text was written with a black ink
It said that someone already having enough
Even, small mistake can be dangerous for such man who look innocent
Original Posted By causechooser►K sekarang balik ke topik utama, gimana cara tuh cewek mati ? Apakah balas dendam dri pemuda ?
What happened to the boy and girl before the news came ? Answer :
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Original Posted By causechooser►Girl aware that she hated by him coz the boy envy on her, so she wrote last words while shed tears in last moment when the boy leaving her afterwards
Based on your opinion and analysis, explain who and what the girl's killer motives ! Answer :
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Original Posted By causechooser►Apakah balas dendam dri pemuda akibat kecemburuannya sama si cewek ? Tpi masa iya sih sesimple ini
Based on your opinion and analysis, explain what is the girl's letter content ! Answer :
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Original Posted By causechooser►Everyone who looked at me so long, pls pay attention to aware on ur surround live, enough only me who suffered due to someone lack warmness in his life, now he had satisfied which should he got for entire life
Based on your opinion and analysis, explain the creator's occurence interpretation in this poem ! Answer :
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Original Posted By causechooser►Writer mean teach us that human life very complicated, nothing really true n false in our life even though we have to aware about humanity start from ur surround like give greet talk, ask about his today, where do u go, etc is it simple, right ? But mosly people nowadays ignore it so no wonder skeptism formed by individualisme easily make everyone get triggered to each other either man or woman, rich or poor, educated or uneducated, red blood or blue blood, etc
What are the moral values from this poem ? Answer :
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Original Posted By causechooser►Just take care ur environment wherever u live like famouse quote "flower can blossom coz there are pollinations but dont too focus on the flower remember tho on those who did it"
What are the correlations between the poem's and the title ? Answer :
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Original Posted By Tmofer►8. 4 - 5 - 6
The poem has 4 lines, 5 lines, and 6 lines in its verses.
4 x 5 x 6 = 120, the smallest 3 perfect number
8. Number of words
If we counted how many words each verses
33 + 42+ 45 = 120
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Original Posted By gm.runningman►But, for the interpretation
Here's the creator actual story
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The boy= Creator interpretation The girl = A girl that the creator used to like more than friend
The girl is yet, really popular in her social environment. She's beautiful, smart, attractive, and seems generous. Her friends always seeing the girl as a "perfect figure". There's nearly no one who let her down. Even, when the girl make a mistake, they won't see it as a problem. They rather comfort her, and prove that the mistake it's nor her fault.
The boy, it just an ordinary boy. He has some good personality. Not too handsome, but still pretty smart and kind if compared to the girl. The girl's friend and other people are knowing him. But, they not put too much attention besides calling for help. When the boy made a mistake, they tend to jugde and force him to admit without considering other factor. Even, if the problem not the boy's fault.
And here's comes the love thing. The boy put his feelings to the girl. But, the girl rejects him. The boy is trying to understand even the girl didn't give any reason. So, he just believe with the girl kindness. That she won't let anyone know about how big the boy's love, while their social status is different.
Mistake is made. The girl openly talk to her friends about the boy's love. She makes fun of it without having a guilt. The girl literally played with the boy's trust. In no time, the boy knows that he's being betrayed. Promise are break. He's love instanly changed to hate.
The boy didn't have anyone to support him. He's just being caged by shame because the girl's story. Like the description above, anyone was focused to the girl's trait, without looking behind. The girl was too perfect to blame. In the end, it's was the boy fault, loving a girl that have a higher status than him.
So, there's no other choice.
The boy can't hold his hatred.
He choose to get a revenge by himself. He's writing a letter, goes to meet the girl at night, and kill her right at the spot. He left the bloody knife and letter in the girls hand, and left the scene. Hoping, that one of her friend found her lifeless body, and read the letter that contained this poem.
P.S.
Hehe, the last paragraph is not real. I still hate her 'till now. But, my heart is too weak for doing evil things. I'm not that type of person. Precisely, i'm forever can't be that type of evil person. So, i'm just sitting here, write this poem, and share it to everyone who wants to read and know how i'm feeling. And i ends up, waiting for time to avenge me. Because, old people says that everythings will be beautiful in right time.
Why i'm using a weird and uncorrelated title for such a poem ?
Because, the theme similarity of a song that i posted with a same name
Well, even it's a game soundtrack, the song was quite dark and unusual
The art was interesting and have a scare factor for me
But still, i'm trying to put a connection between my poem and the song
I choose the esthetic ways because, how i made a dark poem with an explanation about the triperfect number ?
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Original Posted By gm.runningman►Ini tambahan cerita yang menyebabkan the hatred from the boy is special
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Sebenarnya, si cewek ini kebetulan 'atasan' ane dalam suatu organisasi
So, of course we must grow our chemistry to work together nicely
Di awal semuanya terlihat baik-baik saja dan harmonis
Namun, semenjak kejadian itu, si cewek ini bener2 kelihatan aslinya gimana
Dia bahkan mempertaruhkan profesionalitas dia hanya demi perasaan, dibuktikan dari bagaimana cara dia melakukan ane sebagai 'bawahan'
Literally, menjadikanku sebagai babu yang harus mengerti dan wajib melaksanakan perintahnya tanpa pikir panjang
Ane sebagai bawahan pengen berontak
Tapi, ane tidak mau mencontoh dia yang ngomong dengan embel2 profesionalitas, tapi sikapnya tidak menunjukkan hal tersebut
Ane putuskan buat sabar dan menahan emosi di sisa waktu kepemimpinan si cewek ini
Setelah bubar organisasi, maka barulah ane sedikit bebas dari figur si cewek itu
Jadi tambah lagi keburukan si cewek, selain 'pengkhianat', dia sendiri juga 'bawa perasaan' tidak pada tempatnya
Ane juga orangnya baperan
But at least, ane tidak menunjukkan hal tersebut secara gamblang hingga memperlakukan orang lain seenaknya
And, yeah everyone just closed their eyes and choosed to make fun of it
Ane ga masalah ditolak
Ane dah berulang kali ditolak, jadi hal begitu dah biasa banget
Tapi reaksi terusan si cewek ini yang bener2 menganggu dan memecah kepercayaan
Kalau memang dia ga suka, jangan bawa2 itu di urusan kerja
Ane ga merasa bersalah ngaku suka, because itu wajar
Si cewek ini yang kelihatan memasukkan unsur perasaan ketika memimpin sampai berat sebelah
Giliran ane diemin, dia malah ngomel2 soal profesionalitas
Profesional, my ass !
Such a pathetic, yet hyprocite girl
Untung saja status sosial dia dah bagus duluan
Penilaian masyarakat jadi tertolong karena itu
Makanya ane pilih untuk diam dan ga melakukan gebrakan nyata buat bales si cewek itu
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Original Posted By causechooser►Cinta tumbuh karena adanya kebersamaan saling kecocokan bukan hanya sekedar karena dia cantik, karena dia terlihat baik, dll NO its is totally wrong, u should grow relationship first before pick up her to more intens relation
Sebagai org yg pernah menolak n ditolak gw cukup paham apa yg lu alami, mungkin disaat ditolak kita merasa terkhianati terlebih jika kita sudah meluangkan waktu, tenaga, n pikiran sebelumnya kepadanya namun pada saat gw menolak gw sadar ada beberapa faktor yg membuat gw gk fit kepadanya salah satunya LDR waktu itu gw ada ikut pelatihan yg pesertanya dihadiri oleh beberapa perwakilan wilayah disaat itulah gw ketemu dengannya
Bisa dibilang she is kinda cute n easy going girl although there're few people will envy on her tpi yg bikin gw terkejut gk nyangka kita saling cocok satu sama lainnya hari demi hari pun terlewati berbagai macam kunjungan n tempat kita lewati gandengan bersama shikashi ketika kanojo membahas kimochinya disitulah gw blg u're nice girl ever met, we also spent a lot of time recently but im so sorry im not the one who can ldr setelah mendengar itu dia juga lemas tpi inilah jalan yg sudah gw putuskan n tetapkan walaupun begitu kita juga meluangkan sisa waktu kita secara bersama walau pastinya sudah agak mulai kurang intens tapi kita tetap saling mengerti n memahami satu sama lainnya
So daripada lu malu2 tapi suka sama seseorang kenapa gk mulai coba akrabkan diri sebenarnya2 akrab sama org tu (yg pastinya bukan hanya sekedar sapa aja) klo cara pastinya gw juga benar2 gk tahu karena cewek yg selama ini gw berhubungan dengannya tipikal2 ez going n open minded bukan tipe cewek yg ingin dimengerti sebab gw sendiri pribadi juga bukan org yg ahli dalam menjaga perasaan org lain lebih kyk secara spontan mengungkapkan apa yg gw pikirkan
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