*artificial not artifisial There are so many mistakes that I'm not even going to bother. I can correct your mistakes one by one but even until kingdom come I doubt it will do you any good if you don't learn the underlying reasons of why it was wrong and why the correct one is that way. Notes in
"artifisial sweetener" is on my word-list pocket now. besides tenses, I am learning how to create a good sentences too. Well, this is my recent fiction story guys Last night, I had a dream. I could not explain how I got into. When I opened my eyes. I was in some kind of nice restaurant.
You said today as adverb of time, in other words all of your doings happened in the past as you were writing this. Try to use past form instead of present form. Let me rectify slightly. "Today, I ordered a glass of lemonade ice tea. The glass was twenty cm tall with handlebar and blue paint
guys, i am learning english especially in writing. would you mind to correct my paragraph below ? :D "Today, I order a glass of lemonade ice tea. The glass has a twenty cm long with handlebar and blue painting on several side to indicate it belongs to specific stall. It contains tea water, thr
misi senior senior, ijin gabung lagi y. udah lama gak gowes, abis lebaran mulai diaktifkeun lagi nih sepedanya. tengkiuh2.
pake acara transit sehari gak gan? gw gak yakin 5 hari itu cukup ke Shenzhen, soalnya minimal sehari semalem kesana. Kalo Macau bisa pergi pagi, pulang malem. Kalo HK sendiri 3 hari aja msh kurang waktunya. Oh ya gan, nanti pas balik ke bandara HK spare waktunya minimal 4 jam sbml flight. Pengala
pake acara transit sehari gak gan? gw gak yakin 5 hari itu cukup ke Shenzhen, soalnya minimal sehari semalem kesana. Kalo Macau bisa pergi pagi, pulang malem. Kalo HK sendiri 3 hari aja msh kurang waktunya. Oh ya gan, nanti pas balik ke bandara HK spare waktunya minimal 4 jam sbml flight. Pengala
Ane backpacker ke HKG tanggal 05 SEP - 10 SEP 13. rencana keliling hongkong - schenzhen - macau. masukin page one dunk. ane sendokiran, dpt tiket tiger pp 1,7jetian.
Malem gan.. masi ada ngga ya lowongannya ? ane sudah kirimkan CV dan dubbing ane ke alamat email agan ya. tks
newbie ikut nimbrung yah gan/sis... foto nyusul, beresin buku2nya dlu... malu berantakan.... :malus:malus:malus