native speaker? :thumbup:\n\npeace ahh... :Peace:\n\n:D\n\nYeeeaahhh, native speaker to the rescue!!! :D
okeehh..\nnanya dong..\n\nkalo misal gw nulis ini:\npeople may act though even they got a lot of feelings..but they were hoping someone to understand what they really felt..smile and laughter is just made to cover theri sorrow, their loneliness.\n\ncek grammar nya dong :D&...
Oh OK. It's all cleared now. Just asked my boyfriend, a native English speaker, to check out this particular threat. The correct one IS :\n\n"Are the two companies merging into one?"\n\nTeehee we can move on!!! Whoaaa I was actually doubting myself.\n\nNext!...
\n\n\n(1) Example:\n-At 12.00 Sam is eat his lunch. (I)Incorrect\n\n-We are meeting them later today. (C)Correct\n\n\n2.The message was took by the receptionist. I\nuse taken ---> past participle, so BE+Verb III, while took above is Verb II.\n\n3...
Thanks Olli3, but honestly I'm not that overly happy with my version. The idea is still all over the place. If we take a look at it in detail:\n\n\nThe rapid advancement of technology utilized in the tourism sector have produced a significant amount of data to be processed. One e...
Tried my best to adjust the sentences to tie them all together but I think the paragraph can be further refined by adding some more information. Plus it will be nice if we know what is the purpose of the paragraph (intro, abstract, etc) so we know which section to emphasize on.\n\nThe rap...
this is my abstract for final project. Help me to correct it please.\n\nTechnology improvement especially in tourism sector is growing fast and there is a lot of data that need to be processed. The real example for this case is hotel booking system. Many hotel suppliers in Indonesia do th...
yes, you are. T_T. hiks2.\ncrying in the dark room, with a bottle of wine\n\n\n\n\n\n\n(in a fact, drinking sprite with a chitato's a round me :P)\n\nAwww I'm soowwiieee. Didn't mean to mess with ya.\n\nAnyhoo, those pick-up lines wer...
how about this:\n\n"hey girl, please tell me that your father didn't work as a lightbulb maker, cause apparently everytime you're around, you brighten my dark heart"\n\nor this:\n\n"hey girl, you didn't happen to born in 1650 did you? cause yo...
I suck at writing poems as well ><\n\nI write better in paragraphs or scripts but not poems. It's not my area of expertise.\n\nBut hey that was fun! Hehehehe.
Yeah, you are right...I just realized once I re-read it. :D\n\nWell since the girl has just starting to reappear in his thought recently, I guess we can change it to:\n\nDo you know? That your delightful, heavenly reappearance has irrevocably lightened up my heart? ---> Is it t...
sori\ni make this when i think of her, so i did'nt fix again. \nspawn? i use spawn because to much played ragnarok online\nin that game when a friend show up, we called spawn\nhahaha\nsori for my bad english\n\nI see, I see\n\nDon't worry about it, we...
"could me dream come true" or \n"could my dream come true" ?\n\nHi! Hi!\n\n"Could my dream come true?"\n\nLet me try:\n\nEverywhere, everyday, I think of you\nIn some (starry) nights, I dream about you being my girlfriend \...
It is fine to translate things in your head first then say it. Some delay in a conversation is fine and it also gives you time to get the gist of it. Which comes to the notion that in a conversation you are not listening to the words but you are trying to get the idea behind those words. \n...
Good stuff. We are such creature of habits and somethings are just hard to change. Luckily in writing we can always proofread it first, speaking however is a bit harder.\n\nMore often than not, in the beginning most foreigners will think in their native tongue then translate it to english...
I agree.\n\nWell, you can use contractions in informal/creative writings. Definitely a no-no in formal writings such as writing a cover letter unless you want to get turned down right away, speeches unless it's a speech for your bestfriend's wedding, and so on.\n\nOther ...
hi all, this thread is great.. i am student university in malang.. my english is not very good.. that because in school ago, i'm not very take this lesson seriously.. now i regret it... but like "three days grace" said "never too late" aren't we..\n\nnow i th...
My problem is I don't know what to write..\n\nWhenever they told me to write something, i took almost half an hour just to figure out what to write as the opening sentence...lol\n\nSame here! \n\nI took Creative Writing class, read a lot of short stories and books in ...