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Brokenhearted The sadness that consumes you, it's so overwhelming It makes you tired, yet you can't sleep You can't even keep a solid thought, because that feeling keep follows you into your dreams Heartache It’s the type of feeling that you can't easily expressed You hear your own scream of sadness without even uttering a word Like the sound of fallen leaf quietly falling from tree, which is in
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04-07-2014 03:10

How it Feel to be Loved Less, or Not Loved at All (Poetry)

Brokenhearted
The sadness that consumes you,
it's so overwhelming
It makes you tired, yet you can't sleep
You can't even keep a solid thought,
because that feeling keep follows you into your dreams

Heartache
It’s the type of feeling that you can't easily expressed
You hear your own scream of sadness
without even uttering a word
Like the sound of fallen leaf quietly falling from tree,
which is inaudible but you feel that it explodes like a bomb
It’s hurt that only you who can hear

You're wrong
The truth was everybody hears you
They hear you cry your heart out,
while u even can distinguish what you're really doing
You're drowning in pain and do not realize that your neighbours already heard it,
even in that pouring rain

Fed up
Then you'll get tired of crying
You stand up, and look in the mirror
You do not recognize someone staring back at you
A bloated eyes stranger, yet familiar one
The one who's already wrecked to the core

Confused
You don’t know
what to believe in anymore
suddenly you turn into someone who's skeptical
feels like you dont really know who you are anymore
lose yourself
You feel so hard just to find a comfort to your aching heart
And your sense of belonging to someone who loves you less.
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How it Feel to be Loved Less, or Dont Get Love at All (Poetry)
15-09-2014 20:40
Whoa! That was nice, dude!
And what I mean by nice is motivating, yet depressing.. you know? Like those feelings when you hear some sad song emoticon-Big Grin don't really know how to describe it, but anyway, it was awesome emoticon-Big Grin


Sorry for my lack of English, still learning emoticon-Malu (S)
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How it Feel to be Loved Less, or Dont Get Love at All (Poetry)
16-09-2014 20:17
You could make a song of it emoticon-Matabelo
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How it Feel to be Loved Less, or Dont Get Love at All (Poetry)
01-10-2014 04:21
Quote:Original Posted By siie.tatafarra
Whoa! That was nice, dude!
And what I mean by nice is motivating, yet depressing.. you know? Like those feelings when you hear some sad song emoticon-Big Grin don't really know how to describe it, but anyway, it was awesome emoticon-Big Grin


Sorry for my lack of English, still learning emoticon-Malu (S)


thaaanks! but I'm not a dude emoticon-Malu (S)
even I feel depressed writing it, u kno the part about seeing ur shadow after crying emoticon-Berduka (S)
thank u for the appreciation! I'm still learning too emoticon-Malu (S)


Quote:Original Posted By Fadel999
You could make a song of it emoticon-Matabelo


hehe, thank youuu emoticon-Smilie
can u arrange the melody? emoticon-Malu
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How it Feel to be Loved Less, or Dont Get Love at All (Poetry)
01-10-2014 04:47
Quote:Original Posted By online.addict
Brokenhearted
The sadness that consumes you,
it's so overwhelming
It makes you tired, yet you can't sleep
You can't even keep a solid thought,
because that feeling keep follows you into your dreams

Heartache
It’s the type of feeling that you can't easily expressed
You hear your own scream of sadness
without even uttering a word
Like the sound of fallen leaf quietly falling from tree,
which is inaudible but you feel that it explodes like a bomb
It’s hurt that only you who can hear

You're wrong
The truth was everybody hears you
They hear you cry your heart out,
while u even can distinguish what you're really doing
You're drowning in pain and do not realize that your neighbours already heard it,
even in that pouring rain

Fed up
Then you'll get tired of crying
You stand up, and look in the mirror
You do not recognize someone staring back at you
A bloated eyes stranger, yet familiar one
The one who's already wrecked to the core

Confused
You don’t know
what to believe in anymore
suddenly you turn into someone who's skeptical
feels like you dont really know who you are anymore
lose yourself
You feel so hard just to find a comfort to your aching heart
And your sense of belonging to someone who loves you less.


sist, you just krackkk my heart out by those awesome words... emoticon-Matabelo
would you mind if i write mine, here?

and then, we would meet in the widest scenery...
dancing like we would never getting older...
we look at the one same sky, holding hands and promise to each other that we will never be loved less.
this wouldn't be an ending.
just open the door and wait for the train, that brings your heart into an end.

i emoticon-heart you, online.addict....

emoticon-Ngacir
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01-10-2014 14:00
Quote:Original Posted By intanasara


sist, you just krackkk my heart out by those awesome words... emoticon-Matabelo
would you mind if i write mine, here?

and then, we would meet in the widest scenery...
dancing like we would never getting older...
we look at the one same sky, holding hands and promise to each other that we will never be loved less.
this wouldn't be an ending.
just open the door and wait for the train, that brings your heart into an end.

i emoticon-heart you, online.addict....

emoticon-Ngacir


wuooo, that would be a nice happy ending.. after waiting for long, cry yourself to sleep almost every night, and countless efforts to hold ur tears then finally the happiness come emoticon-Matabelo

thank youuu! emoticon-Kiss
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How it Feel to be Loved Less, or Dont Get Love at All (Poetry)
19-10-2014 14:07
Masterpiece!!
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How it Feel to be Loved Less, or Dont Get Love at All (Poetry)
19-10-2014 15:28
what is this ? u yeah tak gendong kemana mana
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How it Feel to be Loved Less, or Dont Get Love at All (Poetry)
19-10-2014 16:09
Quote:Original Posted By aboe21imam
Masterpiece!!

thank You emoticon-Kiss (S)

Quote:Original Posted By tutuyprastyo
what is this ? u yeah tak gendong kemana mana

it's my feeling, in poem figure haha.. I'm kinda heavy, still want to gendong me? emoticon-Ngakak (S)
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19-10-2014 17:53
Niiiiceeeee~

It's a beautiful poem that you wrote there... Remembering me of those ghastly-haunting vision of nightmare that sometimes even come back and haunts me today. After reading your poem, I'd like to add mine as well, it inspires me to write this poem of mine. It is a Shadorma, a type of Poem that originates from Spain and follows a syllabic pattern of 3-5-3-3-7-5 in each of its Stanzas (google it for more info)

"Wishing You..."
By B. Lihawa

I Loved You
The Feeling Remains
Whole of Me
Wishing You:
"May You Always Be Happy"
Forever, Always...
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How it Feel to be Loved Less, or Dont Get Love at All (Poetry)
19-10-2014 19:37
emoticon-Mewek

i havent make a single poem in english
but i do like to read ones, escpecially in rhyme
thats why i read LOTR again n again
those hobbits are hilarious emoticon-Ngakak (S)

and this poem ...
i cant even read it to the last line
i dont have strong heart to finish it emoticon-Frown
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How it Feel to be Loved Less, or Dont Get Love at All (Poetry)
20-10-2014 00:08
Nice poem, like this emoticon-Smilie
Have you ever wished to escape from reality?

NB : Trying to improve my English language skills. Please, just correction if there is an error writing or wrong grammar or etc. I really need that.
Never stop to learn

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How it Feel to be Loved Less, or Dont Get Love at All (Poetry)
20-10-2014 01:28
Quote:Original Posted By bachrun21
Niiiiceeeee~

It's a beautiful poem that you wrote there... Remembering me of those ghastly-haunting vision of nightmare that sometimes even come back and haunts me today. After reading your poem, I'd like to add mine as well, it inspires me to write this poem of mine. It is a Shadorma, a type of Poem that originates from Spain and follows a syllabic pattern of 3-5-3-3-7-5 in each of its Stanzas (google it for more info)

"Wishing You..."
By B. Lihawa

I Loved You
The Feeling Remains
Whole of Me
Wishing You:
"May You Always Be Happy"
Forever, Always...


man, where did u learn Spanish poem? thay's goooood, I can imagine a situation when u hesitate should u wish ur ex a happy birthday or not..then after a deep thinking session u decide to just sent a card (or an email) with that short poem on it.. emoticon-Matabelo

Quote:Original Posted By ariadeneva
emoticon-Mewek

i havent make a single poem in english
but i do like to read ones, escpecially in rhyme
thats why i read LOTR again n again
those hobbits are hilarious emoticon-Ngakak (S)

and this poem ...
i cant even read it to the last line
i dont have strong heart to finish it emoticon-Frown

I even haven't read LOTR yet, sista emoticon-Malu (S)
this is my first english poem too.. but in the past sometime I make something like a headline or tagline that goes in rhyme, like a rap song's lyric emoticon-Ngakak (S)

does this poem make u feel stabbed right in the chest? emoticon-Sorry

Quote:Original Posted By pure.colour
Nice poem, like this emoticon-Smilie
Have you ever wished to escape from reality?

NB : Trying to improve my English language skills. Please, just correction if there is an error writing or wrong grammar or etc. I really need that.
Never stop to learn



thank you emoticon-Smilie

absolutely, all the time... whenever I'm fed up with something that's bothering me, overworrying or afraid of something, I just turn on my laptop, run the Sims 3 then watch One Piece (i mean rewatch it for i dunno how many times) when the game still in loading window emoticon-Hammer
that's my easy, cheap way to escape from reality

and how bout ur way of escaping? don't worry, we're on the same page (in this forum we all trying to improve our english too) hehe emoticon-Big Grin
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20-10-2014 07:25
you're doing good, sometimes i make a poem in indonesian, but next time I'll try make in english emoticon-Big Grin
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How it Feel to be Loved Less, or Dont Get Love at All (Poetry)
20-10-2014 08:15
Such a nice Poememoticon-Big Grin
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20-10-2014 11:03
Lol. t'was nice, I think I might use it in my greeting card for her. emoticon-Ngakak

I'm actuallly a teacher, I had another teacher in the same class as me (I'm a homeroom teacher), she's teaching English, and she taught this Shadorma type of poem to the students this term. I actually also learned and improve my English from her.

This is another example I learned today. It's a Limerick poem (google it for more info)

"Of a Man"
By B. Lihawa

There was once this man who'd wait for me in a line
Always be in his best, never less than fine
But please don't mind,
When he's someone you can't find,
Coz now his heart and mind is mine.
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20-10-2014 11:09
Quote:Original Posted By intanasara


and then, we would meet in the widest scenery...
dancing like we would never getting older...
we look at the one same sky, holding hands and promise to each other that we will never be loved less.
this wouldn't be an ending.
just open the door and wait for the train, that brings your heart into an end.

i emoticon-heart you, online.addict....

emoticon-Ngacir


I love this one too.. heart-warming and joyful
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20-10-2014 13:21
Quote:Original Posted By online.addict



thank you emoticon-Smilie

absolutely, all the time... whenever I'm fed up with something that's bothering me, overworrying or afraidnof something I juat turn on my laptop, run the Sims 3 then wacth One Piece (i mean rewatch it for i dunno how many times) when the game still in loading window emoticon-Hammer
that's my easy, cheap way to escape from reality

and how bout ur way of escaping? don't worry, we're on the same page (in this forum we all trying to improve our english too) hehe emoticon-Big Grin


Oh crap, I already replied to your 'quote' twice and always lost, I have to type it again.

Well, I like to hear music that can makes me feel excited, but I often feel bored of hearing the same music every time.

And also, If I had more money. I go to the cyber-cafe. Download songs, read some articles ( I like reading and had some novels ) or play online games. I like onepiece too. emoticon-Big Grin


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20-10-2014 21:22
[q1uote]Quote:Original Posted By maniacxx
Such a nice Poememoticon-Big Grin

Quote:Original Posted By ID.PrimeStuck
you're doing good, sometimes i make a poem in indonesian, but next time I'll try make in english emoticon-Big Grin
[/quote]
thank you emoticon-Big Grin
rate it, pleaseee emoticon-Angel

let's make another one!

Quote:Original Posted By bachrun21
Lol. t'was nice, I think I might use it in my greeting card for her. emoticon-Ngakak

I'm actuallly a teacher, I had another teacher in the same class as me (I'm a homeroom teacher), she's teaching English, and she taught this Shadorma type of poem to the students this term. I actually also learned and improve my English from her.

This is another example I learned today. It's a Limerick poem (google it for more info)

"Of a Man"
By B. Lihawa

There was once this man who'd wait for me in a line
Always be in his best, never less than fine
But please don't mind,
When he's someone you can't find,
Coz now his heart and mind is mine.

wo teacher emoticon-Matabelo
teach me too, please emoticon-Malu (S)

that poem is great! emoticon-Kiss (S)

Quote:Original Posted By pure.colour


Oh crap, I already replied to your 'quote' twice and always lost, I have to type it again.

Well, I like to hear music that can makes me feel excited, but I often feel bored of hearing the same music every time.

And also, If I had more money. I go to the cyber-cafe. Download songs, read some articles ( I like reading and had some novels ) or play online games. I like onepiece too. emoticon-Big Grin


i kno what u feel.. i experience the same thing too when i try to reply comment by phone (not to mention so many 'typo' i made emoticon-Cape d... (S) )
i did that too! bored to some songs, then wnt to warnet and downloaded new genres/type of songs (i fell in love to kpop after copied a warnet's songs folder)

i like to read too, but not a fan of ebook, it makes me dizzy emoticon-Ngakak (S)

oh n whenever i went to warnet i always download tv series, korean or hollywood emoticon-Malu (S)
it's so sad that nowadays here in Bandung it's rare to find a cozy warnet that's not an online game place emoticon-Frown
i have to spend much money to enjoy coffee shop's "free" wifi emoticon-Hammer2
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How it Feel to be Loved Less, or Dont Get Love at All (Poetry)
21-10-2014 00:13
Quote:Original Posted By online.addict

i kno what u feel.. i experience the same thing too when i try to reply comment by phone (not to mention so many 'typo' i made emoticon-Cape d... (S) )
i did that too! bored to some songs, then wnt to warnet and downloaded new genres/type of songs (i fell in love to kpop after copied a warnet's songs folder)

i like to read too, but not a fan of ebook, it makes me dizzy emoticon-Ngakak (S)

oh n whenever i went to warnet i always download tv series, korean or hollywood emoticon-Malu (S)
it's so sad that nowadays here in Bandung it's rare to find a cozy warnet that's not an online game place emoticon-Frown
i have to spend much money to enjoy coffee shop's "free" wifi emoticon-Hammer2


I think cyber-cafes often visited because people wanna play online games, not just 'online'. Now online games is a good business.
Also, online games make some people addicted.

Afaik, Bandung has free wi-fi available(?)
Especially in public areas emoticon-Bingung (S) emoticon-Bingung (S)
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21-10-2014 00:21
Quote:Original Posted By pure.colour


I think cyber-cafes often visited because people wanna play online games, not just 'online'. Now online games is a good business. Also, online games make some people addicted. Afaik, Bandung has free wi-fi available (?) Especially in public areas emoticon-Bingung (S)

yup, but online game cyber cafe was crowded by smoking guys/teenager and other loud younger boys.. as a 20s something woman who doesnt even smoke i feel kind of uncomfortable Gan emoticon-Ngakak (S)

and mostly there are no 'colokan' available at public place, coz i need to download movie-series which is need about 3 hours with stable connection

i just can bear imagine myself sitting alone at Taman Jomblo downloading them emoticon-Berduka (S)
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