Hai irfan. I'm here trying to correrting your diary,if there had any mistake or not right,i will tell you. (1)After i read your diary you miss placement of coma,and point. (2)As far it's good diary,but one word "sodara" can be chance with "like a brother and sister". And befor...
Hi alia i enjoyed reading your written;)) but sorry let me correction your written : - mukhtsoron jidan is alkitab written by grandmaster ahmad jaelani dahlan : in the placement of names or places must be capital ( Ahmad Jaelani Dahlan) - pay attention to the placement of dots and commas ./, - be...